Writing Blog Comments ... Before and After
This week in Writing, we have been learning how to write good blog comments. Today we are looking at our progress. Look below and you can see some before example and some after. Students in the Senior Hub have reflected on their learning and their progress by posting on their individual blogs. Check them out by clicking on the names to the right of this page.
We started with comments like these...
We now write comments like these...
Kia ora Rimu Class,
ReplyDeleteMy name is Tania and I live in Whangarei. I also work with teachers and learners just like you who are using chromebooks for learning. It is great that you are really focusing on positive, thoughtful and helpful comments. I bet you were amazed at the difference - you have certainly learnt lots since the start and have put your quality blog commenting skills to good use. I bet people really appreciate your comments. Nice work! Thanks for sharing your success on your class blog. A great challenge for you would be to create a video teaching someone else how to leave a positive, thoughtful and helpful comment.
Nga mihi nui
Tania